A handsome young athletic, boy works as a helping hand in the farm
of a person who has a beautiful niece. He was sent there because he was unmanageable
in his home, and his parents could not tolerate his tantrums anymore. He came
from a family of hakim, who gave medicines mostly for free and therefore never
had enough to feed his family of 8 children. The girl was 2nd among
the 4 sisters, who did not have any brother in their home. To replace the
missing son, her mom would seek help from the boy for manly chores. In the
filmy style they both fall in love with each other. No other love story
has ever inspired me more than theirs. In my childhood, I would hear some
family members narrate incidences of their love story. As the love was filmy,
there had to be the usual filmy style of people opposing to their love. The girl
stood strong for her love, even when the boy was intimidated by her huge family
of rich people.
They were the epitome of the adage ‘Opposites attract’. They both
had different attitude towards their lifestyle, as against the rich extravagant
ways of the girl, the boy was one who saved bus fare by walking miles. Even
physically they were poles apart, the boy was athletic, tall muscular man who
had a lean appearance, where as the girl was short and rounded up with long
flowing tresses. They went through tons of ups and downs in their love story,
but nothing could ever tear them apart. Their everlasting odd love which lasted
the onslaught of many social divisions inspires me to write to and share their
story with the world. But nothing lasts forever. How did they finally part
ways?
This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal andHarperCollins
India.
Hi! This is interesting. I believe there's a part 02 to this too. I am damn keen to follow. I must watch out for this space.
ReplyDeleteAnyways am first time here and I like what I see. Keep writing :)
but is they attracted by did they have to part...
ReplyDeleteI guess that will be in next post
Bikram's
Interesting .... all the best :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely a story of "modern" India. Previously a rich girl did fall in love with a poor man (or vice versa) but they weren't able to defy pressures from society that easily. Today they can and they do. I have already "liked" your story.
ReplyDeleteThis could inspire some Bollywood directors :)
ReplyDeleteEkdum bollywood style!
ReplyDelete:)
Please read mine and vote if you think it should make its way into the anthology
http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/248/