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Saturday, January 14, 2012

How Fair Is That?

                          

                         How Fair Is That?
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I shed my tears all alone,
I suffer pain , alone  I groan
I carry my own heavy burden
                       I walk with feet heavy laden
                       I fail, I suffer, I falter and fall
                      So far,no one bothers at all
                    But one smile to show
SmileyCentral.com    Everyone wants to know
    What is behind my bliss
    Like a snake they hisss
   What is behind that smile
                   They look so hostile
SmileyCentral.com  If you want my joy but not my pain
  How fair is that? Think over it again 




12 comments:

  1. induravisinghjJanuary 14, 2012 at 8:21 PM

    touchy poem Farida ji, speechless....

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  2. Deepak KarthikJanuary 14, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    it just reminds me a quote.
    Gold has to dance in fire and has to jump in water to become a beautiful ornament :)
    well said mam !
    a fair poem

    DeepaK

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  3. Saru SinghalJanuary 14, 2012 at 8:41 PM

    True, when you are happy people want to know what's behind. No one cares and listens about the bad phase which we live alone....

    Touchy poem...:)

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  4. Subhrashis AdhikariJanuary 14, 2012 at 9:45 PM

    well said...and so true....the emotion of envy is very human...it is supposed to be a product of evolution to make us survive :)...that's what makes others envy when you smile...and they hardly bother about your sadness....

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  5. Explorer LensJanuary 14, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    truly amazing peom farida ji...

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  6. UnknownJanuary 15, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    from the post i have made out that your one strong woman!!i can feel it from your blog!!

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  7. anatreekJanuary 15, 2012 at 12:49 PM

    Life is unfair!

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  8. Chapters From My LifeJanuary 15, 2012 at 1:22 PM

    Life is unfair, but it is unfair to everyone. That makes it fair.

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  9. MohanJanuary 16, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    Life isn't unfair unless we fail to find a way to get over the short comings. It is all the perceptions... be happy for what you are and worry not about the rest.

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  10. Preeti S.January 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM

    Wonderfully penned and thought-provoking.

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  11. Elvira Lobo(Elli)February 8, 2012 at 11:57 PM

    hiiiii.....amazing poem:)
    a surprise awaits u...do visit my blog http://elli-itsmylife.blogspot.in/ and read the post titled 1st Versatile Blogger Award;)

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  12. LauraFebruary 18, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    much to contemplate here...

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